Use commas around words and phrases that interrupt the flow of the sentence.
Then
like a leaky faucet
drip by drip the information trickles out.
Crost, Mary Lou. "Math Anxiety." The Harper Anthology. Palatine: William Rainey Harper College, 1994. 28-31.
Mom
pregnant and due at the end of the month
sat with Joey as far away from the coffin as possible.
Larkin, Jeanette. "The Secret." The Harper Anthology. Palatine: William Rainey Harper College, 1991. 114-115.
If I
the writer
put everything into what I write
it will come through to readers
even if they disagree or just plain old dislike it.
Polli, Jimm. "The Pen Also Rises." The Harper Anthology. Palatine: William Rainey Harper College, 1995. 104-105.
I had
in essense
done nothing with my life. . .So I sold my business. No
actually
I gave it away to a girl who worked for me.
I learned discipline
the discipline it takes to set a goal and then to take the steps
sometimes tedious and painful
to achieve that goal.
Squires, Meryl. "The Walk." The Harper Anthology. Palatine: William Rainey Harper College, 1991. 161-165.
"Sean's mother loved her belts. She had four different colors--red
black
and white. Depending on the severity of what he did
Sean would get hit with a particular color. Her favorite belt
the white one
had metal eyelets around the holes. . .The DCFS lady
Sean's last hope of escaping his mother's tyranny
drove off in a Swedish car. . . Sean
part of the minority
escaped with his life. . ."
Kane, Geoff. "Don't Cry Over Spilled Milk." The Harper Anthology. Palatine: William Rainey Harper College, 1995. 46-48.
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